My name is Sky. I am 10 years old. I go to Riverdale School. I'm from Ngati Porou. I have 7 siblings.
I am good at science. I admire my mum and dad because they look after me.
This year I am looking forward to becoming a real good learner in class. I want to learn more and more learning.
Kia ora, I am Lucy from Makauri School. I injoyed when you told things about you and your family and your hobbies at school. I learnt that you are 10 and you go to riverdale school and you like science. Maybe next time you could add more of your goals to work on and strengths. here
Kia ora, I am Ruby from Ormond School. I like how you explained who inspire you. I learnt that you was that 7 siblings. Maybe you next time you could write more, to make it more interesting. If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://ormondrubyh.blogspot.com/
Kia ora, I am Kohe from Ormond School. I really liked how you said that you look up to your mum and dad. Did you know I like science to. Maybe you could make the writing bigger next time. If you would like to see my learning visit my blog at http://ormondkohep.blogspot.com/.
Kia ora, Sky I am Rosie from Ormond School. I really liked how you said that you want to learn more and more. I learnt that you have 7 siblings and you are good at science. Maybe you could choose a good learning spot to help you with being a good learner. If you would like to see my learning visit my blog https://ormondrosiem.blogspot.com/ Mā te wā Rosie
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ReplyDeleteKia ora sky
ReplyDeleteI really liked what you sied
I learnt that you have 7 sibling
Maybe you could do have some time away from your siblings
Mā te wā
Kia ora, I am Lucy from Makauri School.
ReplyDeleteI injoyed when you told things about you and your family and your hobbies at school.
I learnt that you are 10 and you go to riverdale school and you like science.
Maybe next time you could add more of your goals to work on and strengths.
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hi Lucy thank you for your lovely nice comment i will put more of my goals and strengths
Deletelook here to see my blog up up above
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I am Ruby from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained who inspire you.
I learnt that you was that 7 siblings.
Maybe you next time you could write more, to make it more interesting.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://ormondrubyh.blogspot.com/
Mā te wā
Ruby
thank you ruby for your lovely comment i would like to see your bogger. Mā te wā
DeleteKia ora, I am Kohe from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you said that you look up to your mum and dad.
Did you know I like science to.
Maybe you could make the writing bigger next time.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog at http://ormondkohep.blogspot.com/.
Mā te wā
Kohe
kia ora kohe thank you for your comment and the feedback i will make my writting bigger so you can see it thank you again for reminding me. Mā te wā
DeleteKia ora, Sky I am Rosie from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you said that you want to learn more and more.
I learnt that you have 7 siblings and you are good at science.
Maybe you could choose a good learning spot to help you with being a good learner.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog https://ormondrosiem.blogspot.com/
Mā te wā
Rosie
thank you Rosie for your comment on my blog i might go on your blog later.Mā te wā
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